That was a great first chapter, although the pace seems to be quick, but this could be your your writing style. Anyway that was good first chapter, and I think it has a potential.

reborn into Naruto with tenseigan and Naruto:wind calamity are way better than this, actually it is the only two Naruto fanfiction that isn't a piece of trash

One of the best Naruto FanFiction i have read,the MC doesn have any cheat and really train hard to get strong with no Power UP comming out of nowhere

That IS the best Naruto FanFiction, the author really watch the anime unlike others FanFiction out there. The MC does not start overpowerd and the way that he uses to get strong are all cannon

Chinese humor is trash

I don't understand how there are people who can like this novel, the characters are forcedly bad (such as Hiruzen), besides the girls falling in love with the MC at first sight, like they literally saw him for the first time and are already willing to kill and die for the hum, If you hear someone saying that this is the best Naruto fanfic you should stay away immediately, because for someone to think this trash is good, it can't be right in their mind.

Boring

This novel is just another cliche novel with cliche characters and a cliche Mc. One thing I noticed is that all of this author's protagonists have the same personality, it seems like he is just recycling characters from his other works.

I ve read only 20 cap and could not continue a Lot of character with a personality that change on every cap including the MC. I don know How this get 4.9 stars Review

You talking about C.P right ?

Reborn in Naruto World with tenseigan, it's realy a good fanfic of Naruto World.