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yh my exact thoughts

if he used void would he win convincingly author

Which family is frost borne

i agree

Good intresting plot but the protagonist has faced 0 adversity till now no backstabbing no jealousy hate crimes I mean thats one part I like but it completely not being there makes it too smooth sailing for the mc and lack of meaningful interactions except dana further there is close to 0 world building aside from the golden dragon city there is hinted that its a big world but the concept has not been developed also there are multiple filler chapters like trial arc and the rewards that followed it took 20 chapters and then the bus incident again pointless an actual development of foreshadowing of where the story is going because there is no clear antagonist it is just the mc getting stronger and everyone is helping him

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Maria and kaleb shouldnt happen id rather see him with a beserker girl maria and michael are better dont mess it up author

Sorry lil bro michael is just better in every aspect i mean quite obvious considering what all hes had to go through while u were protected by your family influence

Nah Maria x Michael need to happen dont muck it up author