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Indominus_KILLJOY3mthReplied to asad_ali_5149- Indominus_KILLJOY3mthReplied to Mohamed_Abdelhay
- Indominus_KILLJOY3mthPosted
im at chapter 1167 and this is quite trash at the beginning it had so much potential he was a cold and calculating phsyco who cared for little other than power i woulda liked if he stayed the same or even if he had character development and changed but what the he is now is hard follow if the author had just stayed consistent with his character n not force romance i mean even cold mcs can have romance with build up but this build is equivalent to heart burn man most people dont have personalities in the later chapters theres this thing thats introduced called ur individuality its esentailly what u have to make unique or refine in ur self to become a god (for example the mc has to continue to strive for power n get stronger because of his individualityor to refine is unique element to fit hime specifically ) its ok when it was introduced but now its used as n excuse to make bullshit choices apperently he had to find love n continue to love the girl cause it benifits his indivduallity no hams against romance but thats a dumb excuse to introduce romance bro intoduce now hes attacking whats esentially a always prepared batman kinda guy whose almost a god with weaker gods as childrens, property so his girlfreind can find a pill thats batman gods owns that benifits her and he cant just do it himself cause helping her that be detrimental to her individuality mind you he is helping her by being a distraction hes fighting two oponents stronger than him for her where is the cold n calulated guy in the firts chapters who wins a lot cause he only fights guys he knows for sure he can win against .christ now bros just gonna have an ass pull to win the same way when the god batman guy king elbas pulls up to woop his ass hes going to pull another ive refened my sharpness n now its sharper than before sharper than uts so i win u lose even though from chapter 1 to chapter 1167 nobody has ever used power like "ive meditated near slash on a rock made buy some one stronger now i can slash space" its always been im level 5 cause my body is lvl 5 but my mind is lvl 4 n my dantian is lvl 4 that means a lvl 5 body mind and dation a can think me out of existence but now its "i think sharp thoughts more than u so now i can cut space" i regret readings i regret writing this go read ( warlock of the magus world) or (shadow slave)
- Indominus_KILLJOY6mthCommented
bro really
Lilith gave me a sympathetic look, nodded as if she had discovered a hidden truth of the universe and said without any shame on her face "It would be a danger to all women in the world! Especially girls of our age, with those muscles and bad-boy looks don't help much...." - Indominus_KILLJOY11mthCommented
Bro u really called that flirting , with the background u made for the character before he transmigrated u made him seem somewhat experienced in life.so I expected him to act like it but its ur novel so I guess if Dont like it ill just stop reading when it's too much to handle
From this friendly flirting, I can conclude that somewhere deep within Gwen she has potential feelings for Peter Parker that she may not have even realized. It is buried deep within her. - Indominus_KILLJOY11mthCommented
đ who pressured u into writing that bro ??đđ who was that for?? đ from now on I dub thee lord cringealot thanks for the chapter but work on ur game NGL that just felt like wired coming from the character ive been reading awhile ago and her reply felt non human but I don't know it might have been a joke between them I hope it was if it is this comment was unnecessary but I wrote to much to just delete pls Dont be one of those guys who makes the MC magically gets what he wants without much effort or failures pls
[GURLLL YOU WANNA NETFLIX AND CHILL??!] - Indominus_KILLJOY11mthPosted
This is the best Got fan fiction there is if its not pls correct me. what is ? the author is brilliant and if there were any errors in the grammar I overlooked it because the story and plot were so interesting. there's finally a story without a system or a harem to make it interesting this is peak fan fiction chefs kiss.
- Indominus_KILLJOY1yrReplied to NeuromancerrrrCh 14 The gift bearing devil.
- Indominus_KILLJOY1yrReplied to antmanFN
no igit it was a bluff
"If you refuse to take up responsibility, I will tender my resignation to the league." She said, causing even Batman to look at her in surprise. "I won't be a part of a league that condones this kind of negligence. It's either that or I petition for you to be removed. It's your choice." - Indominus_KILLJOY1yrReplied to
no igit it was a bluff
"If you refuse to take up responsibility, I will tender my resignation to the league." She said, causing even Batman to look at her in surprise. "I won't be a part of a league that condones this kind of negligence. It's either that or I petition for you to be removed. It's your choice." - Indominus_KILLJOY1yrCommentedCh 382 The 7 Pillar Pantheon
- Indominus_KILLJOY1yrCommentedCh 3 CHAPTER 03
- Indominus_KILLJOY1yrCommented
lol the reason for why
In fact, the reason for why we bond with others is to have a steady supply of phenethylamine. But don't worry, because of my regenerative power, yours will return to normal the moment I eat it." - Indominus_KILLJOY1yrReplied to Arkaj_Bhagawati
- Indominus_KILLJOY1yrCommented
this is a gerat read but once memory erasing comes into play it just turns from a story to fantasy fillfilment i should have seen it comming with harem and then the "cant live withouat a soul mate" thing the fact that he's just letting run wild these massive weaknesses without any thought of the consiqueces it now seems like this is making a bad turn
'...Guess I'll just erase her memory of my Jonas avatar too.' - Indominus_KILLJOY1yrCommented
so someone could defrat u by killing one of ur five weaknesses
That was the thing about Immortals, gods or irregularly long-lived individuals (including reincarnators or people implanted with centuries or more worth of memory). They were expertly capable of managing how they act and were almost always in control of their emotions. But when they snapped, it was always a sight to behold. - Indominus_KILLJOY1yrCommented
its hard to feel for u when u did it to yourself
'âŚHopefully I don't end up in any category.' Eridel thought as he forcefully tried to quell his rampaging emotions. But they only continued to bubble and boil until he leapt to his feet with a roar.