Indominus_KILLJOY

warlock of the magus world

go read (warlock of the magus world) so much better than this trash its so tiring when u reach in the thousands 1167

this is ass

im at chapter 1167 and this is quite trash at the beginning it had so much potential he was a cold and calculating phsyco who cared for little other than power i woulda liked if he stayed the same or even if he had character development and changed but what the he is now is hard follow if the author had just stayed consistent with his character n not force romance i mean even cold mcs can have romance with build up but this build is equivalent to heart burn man most people dont have personalities in the later chapters theres this thing thats introduced called ur individuality its esentailly what u have to make unique or refine in ur self to become a god (for example the mc has to continue to strive for power n get stronger because of his individualityor to refine is unique element to fit hime specifically ) its ok when it was introduced but now its used as n excuse to make bullshit choices apperently he had to find love n continue to love the girl cause it benifits his indivduallity no hams against romance but thats a dumb excuse to introduce romance bro intoduce now hes attacking whats esentially a always prepared batman kinda guy whose almost a god with weaker gods as childrens, property so his girlfreind can find a pill thats batman gods owns that benifits her and he cant just do it himself cause helping her that be detrimental to her individuality mind you he is helping her by being a distraction hes fighting two oponents stronger than him for her where is the cold n calulated guy in the firts chapters who wins a lot cause he only fights guys he knows for sure he can win against .christ now bros just gonna have an ass pull to win the same way when the god batman guy king elbas pulls up to woop his ass hes going to pull another ive refened my sharpness n now its sharper than before sharper than uts so i win u lose even though from chapter 1 to chapter 1167 nobody has ever used power like "ive meditated near slash on a rock made buy some one stronger now i can slash space" its always been im level 5 cause my body is lvl 5 but my mind is lvl 4 n my dantian is lvl 4 that means a lvl 5 body mind and dation a can think me out of existence but now its "i think sharp thoughts more than u so now i can cut space" i regret readings i regret writing this go read ( warlock of the magus world) or (shadow slave)

bro really

Bro u really called that flirting , with the background u made for the character before he transmigrated u made him seem somewhat experienced in life.so I expected him to act like it but its ur novel so I guess if Dont like it ill just stop reading when it's too much to handle

😂 who pressured u into writing that bro ??😂😂 who was that for?? 😂 from now on I dub thee lord cringealot thanks for the chapter but work on ur game NGL that just felt like wired coming from the character ive been reading awhile ago and her reply felt non human but I don't know it might have been a joke between them I hope it was if it is this comment was unnecessary but I wrote to much to just delete pls Dont be one of those guys who makes the MC magically gets what he wants without much effort or failures pls

This is the best Got fan fiction there is if its not pls correct me. what is ? the author is brilliant and if there were any errors in the grammar I overlooked it because the story and plot were so interesting. there's finally a story without a system or a harem to make it interesting this is peak fan fiction chefs kiss.

honestly this is great I started reading this on another site it was so good I had to find it again, because its the best dragon story out there.If think u know a better one u haven't read this

I Dont think he would though ur a great writer btw