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Hot_Sizzling8mthPostedI don't think the author understand the flow, logic and pacing of the OG Solo level world. The author keeps adding elements to the system and stated that it's still the same system in the original, but isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path is in the system? It doesn't make sense. It would make sense if the author add his own system and combined it with the OG system, but he says it's the same as the OG so it doesn't make sense. And the very noticeable mistakes a lot of authors do in fanfics, is that they just copy the original and make or add some elements to the story while not understanding the OG story. The mc has a lot of mana in the beginning but it just shows in the mana reader that he has only 10, and it doesn't even give explanation why it hid his real mana. It just doesn't make sense.
- Hot_Sizzling8mthCommented
isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path in the system? This doesn't make sense, if you the author wants the system to be the same as the OG. But if you make a twist that he has his own system combined with the OG, that will give the plot you're doing a sense.
[The Way of the Shamblu. - Hot_Sizzling8mthCommented
The POV is really confusing. Please stick to 1 POV only and not shuffling 1st POV and 3rd POV.
I passed by a bathroom and came upon an underground shopping center. The various storefronts were in a state of deterioration. With no humans in sight, the dimly lit area was reminiscent of an apocalyptic movie. A hair-raising chill washed over Jinwoo. - Hot_Sizzling8mthReplied to Daoist_Voidwalker
"to see my flesh before me" --> "to se my body in front of me"
And I had enough time to see my flesh before me. - Hot_Sizzling8mthCommentedLiz:" Yay!! Nuts!!" Taking the nuts from my hand, she ate like a chipmunk.
- Hot_Sizzling8mthCommented[ witch] [ Level 25]
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Tank
[Berserker] [ Level 24] - Hot_Sizzling8mthCommented[Hunter] [ Level 22]
- Hot_Sizzling8mthReplied to MrSoleiros
yep same with the 150percent decrease in consumption in the previous chapter where he use shadow clones
[ 200% decrease in wasting Charkra] - Hot_Sizzling8mthCommented
blood has Iron and iron is a form of earth.
[Water + earth] - Hot_Sizzling8mthReplied to Hot_Sizzling
2800 - 4200 = -1400 since 150percent of 2800 is 4200, so if he uses any jutso it should give him chakra points?????
A shadow clone was supposed to take half of my Chakra, but with [Chakra Control], it reduces it by 150%, so instead of 2,800Cpfor one shadow Clone , it takes 1,866Cp - Hot_Sizzling8mthCommentedA shadow clone was supposed to take half of my Chakra, but with [Chakra Control], it reduces it by 150%, so instead of 2,800Cpfor one shadow Clone , it takes 1,866Cp
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"This age is full of war and you are our greatest weapon, now you shall undergo some test," But remember I will be by your side, Kara holds my hand and brightly smiles, she was beyond beautiful. A true angel in this cruel mortal world. If only I knew the hell that awaits. Suddenly I feel a surge of static power engulf my entire body, it was like I was stronger[Can lift up 1-ton], faster[Run faster than Captin America], and smarter[ Tony Stark and Richard Reed I.Q] than ever before, the peak of human evolution. I look ahead and see a bunch of other kids whose eyes were glowing, my silver eyes were also glowing as well. So this power? Is it a gift or curse? I am guessing I am around the age of 8 judging by my height. I look over at Kara, who seductively walks over to me with her long thick thighs glistening with the lab lights above, she right now was wearing black leather skin-tight pants and a white lab coat, she looked elegant and sexy at the same time. During these years she was like the closest thing to a mother for me, she would help me as I undergo hellish experiments, she would always be there for me when I was in pain, we even slept together and spent time doing everything together, she was like a real mother to me. But if only I knew what hell waited ahead of me. For years these used me as a Super Weapon, the army wanted me to kill many people and test out my abilities in powers. I slaughtered so many people, I was too powerful compared to any soldier, not even tanks could take me down. Even at a young age, I was this powerful, like a true superhero. Yet soon things got worse, endless experiments and torture from scientists drove me wild, you would expect that having these powers would make your life better? No, it makes your life hell. I want to escape this prison so badly do whatever it takes to get out. The only thing to keep me from not going insane was reading Comics from DC, Marvel, manga, manhwa, Percy Jackson novels, just anything type of fantasy, anything was better than living in this fucked up world. Reading these things was the only thing that gave me hope to live on. - Hot_Sizzling9mthCommentedWell, INT 13700 was no joke. Plus Neji's 12700 WIS magically took care of the lack of experience part. INT just allowed faster thinking, and chess was much more than just that, and that's where WIS came to play. Some may say that's cheating, but losing against an AI and complaining it wasn't fair because it was a computer was just dumb.
- Hot_Sizzling11mthCommented
I thought it was Philip in overlord. (the one who thought he could bang albedo)
"Sit down, Phillipe." The duke ordered his son. - Hot_Sizzling1yrCommented
why do I see Dio and Jotaro
Due to their unique clothes, their muscles were visible to each other's eyes. Their strength was gauged by their senses, as they stood before one another. - Hot_Sizzling1yrCommented
so momonga can gain divinity?
"And thus Our Lord spoke to us: Bring out your dead, and let them rise in his name! Servitude be thine price, but salvation eternal you shall receive!" The angel's voice echoed in the souls of the lost and the damned who had gathered to receive its healing, following it after it had left the hospital upon which it had stood. "And thus Our Lord spoke to us: Bring out your wounded, damned and lost, and let them be healed in His name! Gratitude be thine price, but sanctity you shall receive!" - Hot_Sizzling1yrCommented
terrible translation
"The King of the Realm..." - Hot_Sizzling1yrReplied to Hot_SizzlingCh 63 Surtur