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2022-02-15 JoinedNepal
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Good luck for the exams.

    Ch 12 Announcement
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    Reincarnated in the Novel as a Villain
    Fantasy · Martialdaoist
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Di?

    "Was his Di got blocked because he didn't train!"
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    Reincarnated in the Novel as a Villain
    Fantasy · Martialdaoist
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Thanks for chapter.

    Ch 53 A Strong Will Part 2: Chapter 52
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    The Mainless Character
    Urban · Simple_Thought
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Maybe a better reason to save her this kind of reasoning usually ruin good novels. It could be a reasoning like 'since the princess is with him pursuer are going to kill him either way; so it is better to take her side'

    Ch 11 A Choice
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    Alantina Online: The Greatest Sword Mage Reborn As A Weak NPC
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Posted

    Excellently written story. Main Character in a game word as an 'NPC', which although being a common trope but usually fails due to character relationships, cringe MC etc. are not seen in this story. It is still in its early stage so just hoping for author to not drop this story and prioritize quality over quantity. Excellent execution 5 stars for now. MC relationship with and MC well fells more humane(having own character). No complains for now.

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    Alantina Online: The Greatest Sword Mage Reborn As A Weak NPC
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Replied to Lol1san

    Wasn't plot already ruined when Lucia survived?

    Ch 29 Vera
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter and I would definitely see the this battle scene as a shameless request. Thank you for giving this story, enjoying it so far. hugz

    Ch 27 Monster Hunting (2)
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Something different for once.

    Ch 1 Rebirth
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    MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.
    Fantasy · Champsing
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    I like your writing style and many others also do soo, so stick to what you like and enjoy while writing. You can skip some days that you don't fell well, fell comfortable while posting a chapter and continue writing. Hugz

    Ch 20 Combat Assessment (1)
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Replied to UnknownMan

    He is not talking about following plot, it has already start changing. What he is taking about is being taken as villain by other as his fate(already determined future actions which he cannot escape) which without following results in his death.

    After all, if I didn't I would die.
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Posted

    The story is too early to judge, I will just leave it at 5 (since I am enjoying it) and update it later.

    altalt
    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 17 Cafeteria
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    I would like to see Valeria if she appears more in mc life (more involved in story) otherwise Luke.

    Ch 15 Witch
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    I also think Isaac 2 fits his personality more.

    click on the comment for this.
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Though the english is bad, the story is interesting enough. I would also suggest to add traits to character while in conversations like being proud, arrogant, beings nervous, etc. Basically read guides for better writing. You can look up to other popular writing of same genre/tags to learn how to write.

    Ch 7 Hellish Pandemonium: One Against a Hundred Thousand
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    Hidden Boss: The Author Become Mob
    Fantasy · LuciFirst_05
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Replied to HugzNeeded

    I will vote for this one.

    click on the comments for this.
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    Villains Survival Guide
    Fantasy · HugzNeeded
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Posted

    The story is still at its infant stage, the characters are still developing. Unlike typical novel where mc starts to take chance or luck encounters of the novel's mc ,the mc is walking his own path. Though not much is introduced in the the initial chapters, the detailed development of mc power is shown. So, I am expecting more from future chapters. I will leave with 5 star for now. Looking fordward to future chapters.

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    The Mainless Character
    Urban · Simple_Thought
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    Sure take your time, enjoying the series so far.

    Ch 12 The Intrepid Ruler’s Challenge Part 2 Chapter 11
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    The Mainless Character
    Urban · Simple_Thought
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    So, mc is using all 4 weapon. I wonder which will be his main?

    Ch 10 Blind Ruler's Challenge Part 4 Chapter 9
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    The Mainless Character
    Urban · Simple_Thought
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  • DeathNight6969
    DeathNight69691yr
    Commented

    A bow user for a change.

    Ch 7 Blind Ruler's Challenge part 1 Chapter 6
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    The Mainless Character
    Urban · Simple_Thought
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