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Excellently written story. Main Character in a game word as an 'NPC', which although being a common trope but usually fails due to character relationships, cringe MC etc. are not seen in this story. It is still in its early stage so just hoping for author to not drop this story and prioritize quality over quantity. Excellent execution 5 stars for now. MC relationship with and MC well fells more humane(having own character). No complains for now.
He is not talking about following plot, it has already start changing. What he is taking about is being taken as villain by other as his fate(already determined future actions which he cannot escape) which without following results in his death.
I also think Isaac 2 fits his personality more.
Though the english is bad, the story is interesting enough. I would also suggest to add traits to character while in conversations like being proud, arrogant, beings nervous, etc. Basically read guides for better writing. You can look up to other popular writing of same genre/tags to learn how to write.
I will vote for this one.
The story is still at its infant stage, the characters are still developing. Unlike typical novel where mc starts to take chance or luck encounters of the novel's mc ,the mc is walking his own path. Though not much is introduced in the the initial chapters, the detailed development of mc power is shown. So, I am expecting more from future chapters. I will leave with 5 star for now. Looking fordward to future chapters.