ChaoticSunshine
Hi there! Thanks for visiting my page! My name is Chaotic Sunshine and I Romance stories. I love black cats and love walking my dogs on the beach.
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ChaoticSunshine2yrReplied to Rayne_RueSorry, please tell me to stop if you don’t want me to check things like that
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Full stop inside speech marks. “What you saying? I know.”
"Looks like somebody got lucky". - ChaoticSunshine2yrCommented
Check you sentence here. It needs to be broken up a bit. How could he be so cruel as to leave me for someone else? I didn’t realise that I was sobbing until a little girl came and wiped my tears away. She bent down and whispered something in my ear…
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Friends do feel awkward in this situation!
He hasn't brought up any news about Emir and honestly I think he knows everything about his friend but he just didn't want to bring it up to me, I hope he doesn't either because the news of Emir will break me down even though, I try at any cost to avoid the media but I know one day this will break me into pieces when I come to know about his tendencies. - ChaoticSunshine2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter: 2
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Just check your grammar on this line. The speech marks are in the wrong place.
"It's just hard for me, not to Jay I loved him so much and you know it I sigh " - ChaoticSunshine2yrCommented
Yes, yes you will !!!
I wonder what will happen to me in the future, will I be able to find love and happiness again, will I be able to move on again? - ChaoticSunshine2yrCommented
Oh my goodness, you manage to capture emotion so well. It is like that, everything reminds you of them!
It's hard to do things without thinking of him because everywhere I look just reminds me of him, every song I listen to brings back the memories of us dancing and laughing for no specific reason. am intruded by the song coming from my TV it's called "To let somebody go by Coldplay ft Selena Gomez " - ChaoticSunshine2yrCommented
Sending out mix messages or what? Grrr
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Jeeze, this made my heart ache. Unrequited love is the worst!
Love gets trampled on and hopelessly melts away, all my relationships ended this way and I thought this one would be it, but this wasn't it until I found out Emir was proposing to someone else, I couldn't surmise it but this was right in front of my eyes, I needed answers to why he would message me and want me to see all that was in front of me. How horrible could this man be, He wasn't the guy I dated 5 years ago could this be his way of getting me out of his way? Looking at the way he puts the ring on her finger tells me he loves her back. - ChaoticSunshine2yrCommented
Love is easy for boys :(
I was so confused about boundaries it's been a while I realized the truth at an unexpected moment. I loved him for 5 years and planned the future with him, but I guess I moved on too fast I was sure he loved me back, he never made me feel vulnerable he was always good to me that it felt like a dream, he put meaning into everything and made endless metaphors, I always believed I was extraordinary to him, he made me feel like I was the only person leaving in his world. - ChaoticSunshine2yrReplied to Ice_Princesss
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