PimpGandalf
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I try to see the good in every novel
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PimpGandalf6 months agoCommented- PimpGandalf6 months agoPosted
Blah, blah, shameless author, blah, blah reviewing my own FF. Not a translation btw
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- PimpGandalfa year agoCommented
I think you should remake it, the writing quality is good but I just feel like you're trying to stay inside your comfort zone of the original plot a little too much to the point. It feels like it's just Ainz but he's a robot now.
This book has been deleted. - PimpGandalfa year agoCommented
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- PimpGandalfa year agoCommented
he clearly needs to learn talk no justu to prevent this
