well the chapter was great. But why did he kill him though, couldn't he have try to recruit him or something?

one more thing, please try to break down the paragraphs some more. Honestly it's scary 😅

This chapter was good. Although I would have like a original appearance of the mc. But overall it was on the right track. Keep going author.

Well in the original work Wikipedia it was given as both gold and metal. But I'll admit gold sounds much better.

Yes, you are right. I will fix it.

Thank you for your support.

Yes, I have fixed all chapter 3 naming spelling mistakes. Thanks for informing me.

Well, I like both of them as well. It's fine for me until story is interesting.

Man, just take rest. Your health is more important than a book. Atleast I can wait few days for new chapters.

Man it doesn't matter how much I appreciate your novel, it also seems less. I can say it is the best danmachi fan fic I've read till now. You're really a hardworking man that's for sure.

It will but for that you have to wait.

That's a good idea, I 'll thik about it.

I am writing new chapter do you have any suggestions?

This is good idea, I'll think how I will apply this in the story, but it can be somewhat different ok?

Does he even need to get to that op, i mean this world is not so powerful compare to some other abruptly power ups worlds like Naruto, dragon ball, or bleach etc. If I decide to go to multiverse than maybe I consider you opinion, for this world mc just need to get powerfull enought to save people close to him.

Well, this is your story so you know better than me, but story is going pretty good for now.

I just wanted to tell my opinion, what can't you just introduce multiverse as far as I know sliver, our mc can travel universe so won't it be great, if we get to experience some more interesting world's.

Thank you for the warning, I appreciate it.

It doesn't matter, I'm writing this story for my own satisfaction.

It's obviously about system states, it takes more time for people to build strength, and he is just 5 years old, so it is even more difficult for him to get stronger. But the system helps him to cross that boundary and decreases the time to accumulate strength.