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Anifix1yrCommentedLol
'He really thought of that too.'- Anifix1yrReplied to FalseProphet_
did u understand what the guy meant
'This one is a bit stronger than the others, after all, it was the only one that dodged one of my attacks even if barely. Well, I must consider that I'm getting tired, so my speed is diminishing. Next time, I must aim for the stronger ones first.' - Anifix1yrReplied to Josiah_Ferguson
I think your dead brain just can't understand the real meaning of the sentence
Noah was surprised but did not fully understand his Master's words. - Anifix1yrReplied to Phenix_RoxCh 4317 Knightly Virtues
- Anifix1yrPosted
The story is a good one, and the pace of the story is going well in my opinion. However a few things I could say are maybe the editing part of the story, and adding something unique to the story that might make it different from others, so that comments such as "the story has nothing new" or anything similar comes up
- Anifix1yrPosted
There must always be a factor which makes a novel different from others and the unique cultivating method makes this story totally different from others. Some may like it and some may hate it, nonetheless, we must admit that it is very creative. Concerning the writing quality, I must say that I have seen many of the skills you have that I lack in your writing skills. I also love the creative names you give to the characters! Keep up the good work!
- Anifix1yrCommented
Creative names... nice!
Cagnus's grandfather, Kanotoly Aprov, greatly influenced Cangus when he was growing up. He taught him all kinds of stuff, ranging from literacy and chess to even fighting techniques. - Anifix1yrCommented
That's just me, but I ain't living in conditions like that... but that's just me
The moment he stepped foot inside, his nostrils were assaulted by the nauseating smell that lingered inside. The odour was pungent and unpleasant; it left him extremely uneasy. - Anifix1yrReplied to BishopsNemesis
that's a unique way of cultivating
"At least I will spend a comfortable three to four years in this place." - Anifix1yrPosted
The story so far is going really well, and I love your book cover, it really attracted me, but if there's one criticism I can add is the how you introduce many characters at once, so it makes it quite hard to differentiate their personalities, however, I would say that overall you've got a good story on your hands!
- Anifix1yrPosted
Two things that I love in this story and that instantly caught me. The first thing is how impressive your freakin book cover looks. From the moment I saw it, I immediately knew it was going to be a good one. Secondly, it's your story development that is going well. You've got a great story author
This book has been deleted. - Anifix1yrCommentedAnd to his surprise, it worked. The ability book was safely put into his system storage with his beast crystals.
- Anifix1yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Reborn
- Anifix1yrReplied to haremphobic
I dont see the mistake
Her words shook Nalia, and Langris who were amazed by her bravery in such a situation despite knowing she was no match.