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did u understand what the guy meant
I think your dead brain just can't understand the real meaning of the sentence
The story is a good one, and the pace of the story is going well in my opinion. However a few things I could say are maybe the editing part of the story, and adding something unique to the story that might make it different from others, so that comments such as "the story has nothing new" or anything similar comes up
There must always be a factor which makes a novel different from others and the unique cultivating method makes this story totally different from others. Some may like it and some may hate it, nonetheless, we must admit that it is very creative. Concerning the writing quality, I must say that I have seen many of the skills you have that I lack in your writing skills. I also love the creative names you give to the characters! Keep up the good work!
Creative names... nice!
That's just me, but I ain't living in conditions like that... but that's just me
that's a unique way of cultivating
The story so far is going really well, and I love your book cover, it really attracted me, but if there's one criticism I can add is the how you introduce many characters at once, so it makes it quite hard to differentiate their personalities, however, I would say that overall you've got a good story on your hands!
Two things that I love in this story and that instantly caught me. The first thing is how impressive your freakin book cover looks. From the moment I saw it, I immediately knew it was going to be a good one. Secondly, it's your story development that is going well. You've got a great story author
I dont see the mistake