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I stopped reading after chapter 135 after waiting fifty fucking chapters to see the mc not this stupid pompous fuck Edwin if I wanted read about a shit character like him in wouldve gone to some other generic fucking fantasy I thought this would be a really good story qt the start but guess what you fucked it u don't care about the god of darkness I dont care about fucking Edwin I read this story for the mc and somehow you wrote this story more about the side character then the mc its fucking ridiculous I dont mind the occasional different povs but when it goes fuck 55 fucking straight chapter im done it was probably more honestly I just stopped reading after realising the god of darkness wasn't the mc I mean I suspected but I wasn't sure because 4 chapters I actually seen of him you dragged out actually telling us who he is fuck off your a shit writer
its a webnovel thing u can turn on when writing a novel where it will automatically put comma every certain amount of time
I wanna punch this author
I know this happens in so many novels its so stupid
novel?
bro hate this shit at the start like chap 20 or sum he forced her to sign a marriage agreement and she could do nothing about bro if u really wanted to beat the guy you should've taken a fucking gun like do u not remember what happened last time it would have been so easy if she just took a fucking gun bro and it says she doesn't want her master to use her mother to control her that exactly what he's doing but with her fuxking daughter its so stupid and let's be honest she should've been able to kill him without a gun I dont care how well trained he is its bull shit he can causally beat one of the best assassins in the world
I hate shit like this personal experience is a novel I read with 400 chapters that had the villain tag I read the first 20 and there was no concept of the main character ever becoming a villain the story was about how he pretended to be the villain. I then proceeded to waste my time further by reading to chap 100 thinking maybe he become a villain later NOPE I was super frustrating and like in this case the title had villain in the name and as a tag it is super annoying when a author does that im not gonna sit here and tell you how to write but the villain tag is for when the mc is a villain and in that case he was not.