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its not too bad but there are some dumb moments heir and there. like the Daimyō taking part in the hokage selection and everyone acting like he is there boss. the ninja villages are not subservient to the Daimyō. they want his money and he wants protection. the other problem is the characters sometimes acting ooc. like danzo getting flustered easily. the plot is not bad though like the author is very bold. trying not to spoil but like he saves who ever he wants which is not very liked overall but he do it anyway which is a plus because we need more creative authors like this.
it was good at start but then it started to have a lot of contradictions like around chapter 665 he fight with a faction .at first they say that the strongest in that faction is 14 star but then till the end the strongest final boss which change fazes many times and become stronger many times is only at 13 star. then they say the youngest general stage after the mc becomes a general stage at 30 years old, buuuuuut one chapter later its reveled that his master became a general stage at 27 . and then there is a tournament where all the youngsters that are participating are below 25 general stage youths. and a lot more that i ignored at first thinking its a mistype or a one time thing.
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