It's perfectly fine. I have a habit of being too honest. So I'm serious when I say that you lost 1 star with me just on those mistakes (I personally use Microsoft Edge to fix it by making a pdf of my work and ask it to read it for me aloud). Overall, you did a really good job with it. An interesting idea and a pretty nice execution.

Before I go into any detail, I need to mention a few things..., for one, the book feels more like the author is writing it for themselves and not others, or they just don't care all that much about the readability. On average, it's like 0.7 spelling mistakes per paragraph and it can get tricky to guess at first sight, so it does sometimes break the immersion. The other thing is that, there was this one chapter (I just checked - chapter 6) at the beginning of the story introducing some new characters and then nothing more for more than 40 chapters. No mention, no obvious development in that area, it wasn't even a full chapter that was first dedicated to it.OK, fine. I'm good now, so let's get to the story, shall we?First of all, and something that personally got me interested, was the world building and the way author explained why you can't just pop a gun out of nowhere and "win the game". It's very intuitive and nicely weaved into the world. The background was also neatly put together without revealing too much.The story goes rather slow, but has enough action to keep you invested in the plot. And as we reach the plot I have a feeling (not a good one) that we will get some oh so worked to the bone MC's very tragic backstory... It wasn't introduced yet (I'm on chapter 51 right now), what it is, but there were some thing that made me think so and they also messed quite a bit with the image of the MC.At first as we are introduced to the MC and learn that they (author refers to the as "he" MOST of the time) are a dungeon, we are also told that they think they remember being human and some other things, but no spoiler... The point is that they discard that thought right the next second and we start to learn more about him in the light of something detached from the world of mortals, living in a different reality, in more ways than one, but then things happen and for some weird reason...Please consider, if you want to read ahead as it will be a teeny tiny spoiler.Please consider, if you want to read ahead as it will be a teeny tiny spoiler.Please consider, if you want to read ahead as it will be a teeny tiny spoiler....for some weird reason he just suddenly remembers that he ?was? ones a human, because he got a headache over having too many options about what to do (in all honesty, there were just two... it was just two options... and not really that complicated) and now our beloved MC is acting like a scared lil' ... I won't say it. Judge yourself. After a short moment, things are back to normal, but man, really?

I think you meant "...would then..."

Overall, a very well written story. The only real downsides I can see are small inconsistencies when it comes to names (people, techniques, places and so on) as well as the simple fact that there isn't all that much story to begin with.

I think this means you just missed your cue, 'cause it's 6:46 UTC on Monday now and still nothing.

I would say it's a good, well-balanced story with op mc and with some gentle winds of reincarnation. The world building is on the slow and steady side of things, but it's not lacking. When it comes to characters and their development, it doesn't fall behind anything else. With that in mind the mc is a little weird in a sense that a full-grown man has a personality as stable as a kid. Also, the chapter list is a mess. As I write it more than half of the chapters are just signed as "dno" and they are just versions of other chapters, aparently autor writes them as a draft for chapters, but if that's the case then make them private or something, because I can't see if autor posts a chapter or a draft.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

OK, first it somewhat made me feel a little refreshed when Klaus took a hit. No idea why exactly, but not the point, it makes- OK, I will stop. On the flip side, I'm not sure how long are they going to smack each other around, but not sure, if Shaman and co- will have enough time to rank up in time and even less have a chance against Klaus, tier 8 dungeon or not.

nice

I hope you don't mind my ignorance, but where?

But wouldn't this mean that when Klaus goes out to get the second artifact, then would be her best chance to get him? I mean, it is no longer on his turf and he is about to fight someone else and later he will only get stronger as he collects more artifacts.

-What did I complain about just now? -Ah yes, MEATING THE POPE! -I really did myself this time, did I?

Although it's a little clishé, I like how it ended and while the word I used may imply a negative impact, I stand by the statement that nothing is truly original so it's fine and the classic with the doors gives it some reference vibes so it doesn't come across as monotonous or predictable. PS I am still scared to see the pope. I already said why he makes me feel unease (under the chapter where Himeko used her reincarnation ability, I think (or somewhere there)) and well... I have a question. Why again can't Freya just go and beat him into a pulp, because if I remember correctly, she is quite a bit stronger than Klaus, or I just misunderstand something.

I like how Silver and Elanor just 'Noped out the moment they saw it happening.

It's a shame, but unfortunately I don't think I see Shamans new getup. Not that it's bad I just can't seem to imagine how it looks... A real shame, indeed.

I would still keep them, because it seems like it's a lot harder to get a level up on higher levels.

Do you remember when, 'cause it slipped my mind that she said that ?

That's a cute ending. It's an ending right...?

She can still remember those few words for later, it might come in handy and she already knows what this means even if it's not translated.

I can see a huge compatibility bonus for the girls in this fight, but it can't be ignored that it was Axel's arrogance that saved their buts this time.