Write up is quite good from a grammar and literary skill point of view. However character background is weak af…. Son of a servant to the youkai. Not an enjoyable read for those who hope for an op mc. Youkai backgrou is one of the weakest in the entire dxd verse….not to mention he is a cat subspecies.

Weak

Pretty weak background for an MC ….. son of a servan girl of the youkai faction. Youkais are probably one of the weakest in the entire dxd verse…. Not to mention mc is son of a 4tailed cat girl.Highly ridiculous…. Would have better if he were a human. At least humans have potential