Drake_20043257

hello readers, i am back atleast For now, i will just edit the released chapters and remove all the extra description. I know that all my chapters have more of that description and all so for now, I will only focus on them and after that, I will see if I should write the chapter at what interval, as you should know that in Japanese novels, chapters are written in like 1 month 1 chapter and after a volume is ended, it will be after 6 months or a year the next volume will be started. So think of those 26 chapters as the 1st volume and from now on I will at least make 2 to 3 chapters in a month. and I am giving it 5 stars because I will give my all to write the novel and if there is some problem in a chapter and readers don't like the progress of the story, then I will just rewrite it all again and again. If there is not much character development, then I will add a novel that will be a slice-of-life version of this novel. And if you guys asked me to change something in the novel and if the change will make the story better, then I will just make that change. This will be a very slow novel

will become very immortal or not

i want to know will he be immortal or not

will this be continued

no not for the time being but 1 to 8 chapters within a month because exams have started and I'm just writing for fun .

I read all the chapters and when it came to chapters above 600 I can clearly say that the author is clearly using Chat GPT for the chapters. because of this I get irritated by unwanted descriptions and an unknown old story like sentences where words like testimony to his long life,testimony to his powers. unwanted descriptions to make the chapters more big and to do so author used Chat GPT and because of that many times reading the chapters inbetween the scenes the tone of the writing changes and it really makes the whole experience of reading the chapters real bad. I know that those sentences using AI comes very very rarely but when that comes it really makes me think of stop reading and supporting this novel because it just makes me irritated by that. I don't know about other readers but for me everything about this novel other than after some chapters i.e after 600 chapters Writing Quality fall to a very low level because of addition unwanted descriptions in between the protagonists looks and sentence like because of him the air become this and that because he is a demon bla bla... . well using descriptions once or twice is all right but many times too much and that's not the thing but the discription doesn't even match up to the story. I just want to say to author is that just don't use AI to make the chapters bigger and if used just change the tone of the sentences

guys I want to continue this story very much but 😭 but I don't get the time for world building . I want this novel to be a perfect one so in the near future I will restart writing the novel once again but for now this novel will be paused. I will start writing another novel it will basically be a translation of a mtl novel and I will try that all the key components different.

I know that the description is unnecessary but just bare with this until chapter 30 because I have already written 50 chapters so it will take me a lot of time to redo all chapters . So I will start rewriting chapters from chapter 31st chapter. This is my first time writing a web novel so I'm thankful for giving a review 😁.As this is my first web novel I want it to be as perfect as it could be 🤔.

Just bear with me for the first 30 chapters, as I lay the groundwork for the story. After that, I'll shift to the real narrative without over-description.

This novel will have regular chapter release and will not be dropped till end and I think this will be a longer novel more than 1000 chapter at least with world building and character building.