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This is so good, can't wait for more!!! The writing could be a bit better but I can see that you are improving very fast.

I love all of this! Very excited for future updates, no stress to the author tho! I wonder if there will be romance? I would like it if there was none but I will go with whatever the author chooses to do.

Meer is an alternative spelling for mere.

Laying**

She can use both. they wrote it while she was lazing on the ground.

Hello people, this is the author and I just want to say that this story is kind of slow but It is worth it, at least for me. 🙌 2 chapters for every update, not sure if it going to be every week however if I had already created 8 chapters then it would be 4 weeks of 2 chapters each. 💙 Also any opinions on the pov changes? I tried to make it smooth but I don't really know if it truly is, and what do you guys think of the characters introduced so far? (Writing this on the 10th chapter).

I really liked it! Author, please keep on updating, I will wait. Also, correct the pronouns to he/him/his because I can see that it is shifting between she/he's.

Wow, I never read a book like this before! I'm very excited! Author keep going, I'm very inspired by your novel. I thought that the mc was going to be a human stuck in a store but who would have known that the mc is the store!

I really like this idea of a novel, please continue!