damn I loved Rise of Australia I didn't realise it got banned :(

yo where can I read the raws, thanks.

The author has obviously used AI such as ChatGPT to enhance his writing, however he relies on it too much, the story is generic and the dialogue is horrid, even worse, the author has used 'smurf' accounts to leave good reviews on his own books.

Would be great if the author didn't use ChatGPT.

bro rhymed one with one 😂

good but I wished it wasn't so fast paced. Also when you killed off his aunt or whatever she is it felt a bit abrupt since we like hadn't heard of her at all up until that point.

update: I found it.

I created the book cover so it's 100% stolen. Can you link the chinese fanfic you found with the cover?

can you give me a link to it, I can't find it.

Hey Author can I have link to the raws I can't find it anywhere.

It's alright but you might want to run it through Grammarly and have someone look over it for you. Especially since your book cover has a spelling error.

yeah just give it a think, I don't quite know what you meant by your response, sorry.

I can painfully tell that the author is either very young or does not possess english as his/her main language. The text reads as though it has been run through AI and has quite a lot of jarring and unnecessary descriptions. Overall its in the top half of webnovels in that it is legible and possesses good potential.

I like the idea behind it. I am a native english speaker, if you allow me to, I'll edit the writing and make it clearer, then repost it on my page, with all credits and links to you of course.

Hello, this is the author on a different account, my institution blocked my access to webnovel on my original email, so now I am unable to upload any more chapters, lmk if I should copy and paste all my stories onto this account.

Will have to wait for more chapters to release, the story is progressing nicely and minimal errors can be found. Until then, peace out.

thanks

Make you pay your debts in due.???? CHANGE TO Make sure you pay your debts in due."

lowkey this stupid as hell max 3 million viewers not 300 million.

Dropped :(????