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Review Detail of Cleisthenes in Forging an Empire with technical knowledge : oliver path to prosperity

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Cleisthenes
CleisthenesLv11yrCleisthenes

I can painfully tell that the author is either very young or does not possess english as his/her main language. The text reads as though it has been run through AI and has quite a lot of jarring and unnecessary descriptions. Overall its in the top half of webnovels in that it is legible and possesses good potential.

Forging an Empire with technical knowledge : oliver path to prosperity

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yes.. you guessed it right .. it is my first novel... although i dont know if i will have contract or not , but i ll. still upload chapter for everyone to enjoy

Cleisthenes
CleisthenesLv1Cleisthenes

It's alright but you might want to run it through Grammarly and have someone look over it for you. Especially since your book cover has a spelling error.