Kayaknya ceritanya berkiblat ke daerah India gitu ya, jadi bagi yang suka India sih keknya bakal suka sama cerita ini. Alurnya bakal menarik sih. Semoga terus lanjut ya

Keren loh ceritanya, aku gak pernah terpikirkan ide tentang jelly yang ngebuat sakit gitu. Good job author, aku harap tetap update terus dan cepat dapat kontrak!

Aku suka cerita awalnya yang ngebuat karakter utamanya jadi lebih kuat, terus penulisannya juga bagus, untuk kata pertaman pakai huruf kapital semua di awal paragraf mungkin ciri khas dari penulis kali ya, tapi secara keseluruhan ini sangat bagus. Semangat!

I read your two chapters, I think they are quite interesting and have the potential to be a good story. taoi if I may comment, your writing still has some errors, I hope that in the future it can be improved again

Good story, I really like the length of your story makes me satisfied in reading. the characters and plots that you present also make me curious

Very interesting story if i'm still a bit confused with some of the characters but overall it kept me interested. the plot you find is very unique to me. author spirit!

The main character looks very sad but made me interested in the development of the character. Overall I think it's good but there are still things that can be improved in the future

after I read a few chapters, I really like the main character of your story. the plot that you present is also interesting and makes me curious. great story, keep it up!

I like how you started your story, with a curious question. I think the characters and plot that you present are very interesting, it makes me addicted to continue reading your story

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Good story. I am very addicted to your story, especially with the main characters. The plot you describe is also very good. You must read this book

I love the Ashley character you wrote, she is a strong and characterful woman. I was also interested when I read the title of your chapter one "online boyfriend" and I tried to relate it to the title of your story, it was very interesting and made me wonder.

I really really like this story. The interesting storyline and the fantasy that you put into the story really made me unable to stop reading this story. the length of the story of each chapter is also satisfying and interesting to read.

Jujur suka banget sama ceritanya, alur waktunya benar benar dibuat dengan matang, terus penulisannya juga rapi, jadi nyaman buat dibaca. Aku bakal nunggun konflik dari cerita ini.

Aku suka sama ceritanya, udah lama gak baca cerita percintaan remaja kayak gini. Aku bakal nungguin konfliknya gimana terus juga penulisannya aku suka banget, rapih menurut aku.

The theme you bring up in my opinion is interesting about a writer spiced with fantasy. Penelope character also I think is very unique. i like this story

After I read a few chapters I became more and more interested in reading the next one. the length of the chapter also makes me satisfied. I look forward to what kind of romance you will create in this story.

I've read your three chapters, I'm looking forward to your conflict and character development. I really like the romance in the berries in this story. author spirit!

I like the storyline about the past and the fantasy you put into your story is very beautiful. I rarely come across a writing style like yours but it's not bad for me. keep it up writer!

Menurutku ceritanya menarik karena biasanya yang CEO adalah pria tapi kali ini adalah wanita. Karakter prianya juga unik jadi seorang OB, merendah untuk balas dendam. Kalau boleh saya mengkritik penulisan nama diawal ya harus selalu kapital dan juga masih ada beberapa typo, semoga kedepannya bisa lebih baik. Semangat!