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ah this trope, hope I'm not seeing a pattern

thanks for the heads up

I know this chapter kinda betrays the premise, but I'll allow it, because of your steady pacing, not slow, not fast, it kept me curious, and now I'm really curious.

....okay this feels like things are jumping around way too fast, I'm really considering whether I should continue reading.

you're evil, don't do that again

literal whiplash from the previous flow