Oreoluwa_Olaiya

it is good and I like how it is going but at this point it is annoying that the protagonist has to keep sending his people out to defend various battle zones when his own territory may also be in danger. if the alliance can not provide enough people they should just abandon it and shrink their territory because with how this novel is going it will be better if the protagonist just create his own faction just by using his city alone . I get that the alliance still provide help, but at this point, they are just annoying

it is good, but my problem with it is that you Created a race, I know that it is powerful, but it does not make sense that you made them have few people because It is a race, and it should have more members not few, And you made it harder to recruit than other races. It is a territory, and it cannot just have a few people defending it. From what I can see, it doesn't look like this novel will go far. It looks like it would be dropped at one point because the word view has collapsed.

To author: To me your work is perfect. I just have a suggestion like when vitiate says that it costs a lot to build a nation, can't he just dedicate an entire dungeon floor to building buildings/houses he needs like in spectator mode by imaging how he wants it to look like. I mean sure it will take a lot of do but it should be possible and when he has the land for it he can just move it there. And since his race is going to be a battle race he could just tell them to hunt monsters for their corpses to use as do which he can exchange for a gold bar. Plus if he does build the buildings from the dungeon he can connect it to his dungeon meaning the more his race grow the more people stay in those houses and which supplies him dp. So he doesn't have to worry about do for his dungeon