I like fantasy and action stuff
Writing
of reading
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Read books
yes!
No, it's not going to be a harem story
Sorry. I will take that into account in the nearest future
I hope so. I wanted to make use of these informations of his original world for a later arc in the story, but I don't know if I can pull it off successfully or if it'll even matter because that arc is so far from where I'm currently that this might just be useless.
Thanks for the comment, that's something I ended up doing in the later chapters as someone pointed out this problem to me before. I will change this as soon as possible.
I'm new to this genre, so this may differ a lot from other reviews. The story at times feels rushed, there are some grammatical errors here and there, but those are not the main problems I've found in this story. The relationship between the main characters develops way too fast; some interactions feel unnatural, and sometimes they don't feel consistent. The first chapter was probably the best out of the first five. The story has some potential, and with some minor fixes, the story could reach new heights.