That was nice, especially the entrance

Such great chapter

Nice chapter! Thank you author!

I'm excited to see how thing would go after this, keep it up!

In my case, that's how I think my work goes but who knows? First, I must say that the phase I'm going is my very own original. Please see through the story engrave your feedback!

Alright imma take that and renew the chapter, hmm should I mix his birth and the prologue?

Yep I'm still in the middle of improvement lolol

Added ;)

Haha thanks the chapters are good how do you make them 🤣🤣

You're doing great, you even did better than me lolol it's my first time too wanna check it?

Alright, looks like faith showed you to me so I guess I'll help you ig? But I don't have anything to help! So this part I'm a little bit of confused at first but I noticed it at the part when the quote was said so it's mainly my fault so the first chap is good I like it keep up man ill wait for next ch :>

I'm also writing my very first novel at my acc and it's currently on 20+ chapter and I'm thinking of making more in the future so I'm inviting you to follow me on my noveling journey :) It's title is -Divine World:A Soul's Journey to Learn his origins since I'm here to advertise my very first novel imma give my honest review don't misunderstand me I'm following your story and updates advertising just randomly came to my mind :) I like it, lol The story line is good the flow is very good And about how the mc is truly acting how a dragon does and not forcing himself as a human because Aether is a human in his past life The concept of the world the mc live in, it is good the history, and describing a specific location it's friggin good its where I'm finding hard to explain on my novel lol, the location describing I mean And about the side characters and his siblings, they all have different traits and personalities and cleanly explained

Man I've waited for a month and hoping for new chapters but it looks nearly impossible as the author looked like he totally dropped the novel I even liked it and no it isn't a lie I like the story line and it's only 5 chapters

I like that name~ imma name her that once Ash met Ms. Catherine :>

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Okay~

Ahahaha

Ohh that's a problem, tnx

Oh yeah this is how Ash was born ,just plain terrible ha...ha.....

Jk