HatefulRaijin

just finished playing wotr the last few days so I was pleasantly surprised to see ember here, she's so sweet she even managed to redeem demons

it's pretty nice, the characters are great, only complain right now is that theres too much magic stuff and it barely has any of my hero stuff, well it is understandable since it currently only has 18 chapters.

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it's nice to finally see a fanfic gets finished, it's pretty rare to see one get finished, I had a blast reading your story! thanks for writing!

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oh i thought his sisters knew he went out cause I remember something about him still having pocket money when he first went to saitama and I thought the pocket money came from his sisters or something

I just reread and her powers does work on him I'm just guessing it's because he's not actually a 4th dimensional character but someone that could just go to the 4th dimension so that's why it works, just go to the 4th dimension then her power should stop working there it's not like she's so powerful that it could transcend dimension if she was that powerful she could've killed Skylar herself and according to the MC she doesn't cause she does to Skylar anyway. that or I'm overestimating the MC's power

I'm fine with slow pacing tbh and never really saw the show so idk if you're sticking to the plot or not, I just want for Peter to tell the MC what he wanted to say already. But I have a bad feeling that stuff would just keep interrupting him.

also I just noticed this is the only fic in your original works for some reason, so I had a mini heart attack thinkin I commented on the wrong fic, but I know your other fic is still up cause I have it in my library, what's up with that? is webnovel just buggin or something?