Ganamos

That was actually funny

This is more a like fairy tale

The story feels very natural, with smooth transitions and a good pace. I’m excited for future chapters, there’s a lot of potential here

I’m liking it

Espero que alguna vez hayas escrito algo, no sabes lo difícil que es. Pides más capítulos como si fuera injusto, al menos antes de quejarte ve a apoyar al autor en su patreon

¿Link de la novela original?

Está un poco mediocre…

The truth is that in the real world there are things that no matter how hard you try they would simply won’t work, is not your fault or anything, it’s just how things are…

Let’s give it a chance