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part_time_Otaku9mthPosted- part_time_Otaku1yrCommented
bruh..why so many people cringe?
A wave of energy seemed to emanate from the sword as I shouted the releasing command. "Judge all things in this universe! Zanryuzuki!" - part_time_Otaku1yrCommented
don't throw stones with your glass house
'Medea is a natural beauty. It's a shame she covered it up and grew shameful of her appearance as she grew older in Fate...I can never forgive Jason for tainting such an innocent girl' - part_time_Otaku1yrCommented
whisper it to me
In an instant, the arcane phenomenon vanished around her. She had returned back to being a simple housewife in a rural farming village...how ironic for [҉ᕯ҉ᕯ҉ᕯ҉ᕯ҉] - part_time_Otaku1yrReplied to Feniurme
amazing deduction..
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I am sorry but this has been pretty mid so far.. Almost a copy paste of the movie..The MC does not even have a dialogue..He just said the witty things someone else said in the movie.. At least change the situations and dialogue a bit.. Writing quality is sub par and description is lacking..It's a wonder it ranked so high in my opinion But if this is Author's first book? The he need to be more serious.. Experienced or not anything written with passion and enthusiasm can be seen and I have not seen any in this... Good luck Author..Hope you don't drop and prove me worng in upcoming chapters
- part_time_Otaku1yrReplied to Chamunda_
it is not a harem....or so he says.. I think even the Author is confused whether he should say this is harem or not.. He did mention that there is only going to be 1 wife at the end... But .urgently there are three love lines..Momo, Ochako, Tooru.. There is no telling that the current girlfriend will be wife though
- part_time_Otaku1yrCommentedCh 302 302: I am done here (2)
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yeah.. you truly messsed up
Firstly, it was his fault that he banged around with so many girls in this world within just two months, it was a big mess because of that. He should have stopped himself and restrained his little head the moment he found the first five believers. Neji promised himself to not make the same mistake in the next world. - part_time_Otaku1yrCommented
your writing is already godly
Prompt: Like a ripple in a pond, growing as it undulates outwards, I promise my writing will get better as you go. Give it a chance and continue reading... - part_time_Otaku1yrReplied to DaoistnMkJQ8
- part_time_Otaku1yrCommented
nice..
This scenery outside was unfamiliar to her, as she was more used to seeing cherry blossoms in spring, rather than this absolute peaceful green. However, that was to be expected since this wasn't Japan she was currently in; rather, a small country located in the Indian Subcontinent, the country of greens that was Bangladesh. - part_time_Otaku1yrCommentedCh 2 Hinata's Sensual Adventure: Morning Dew [Part B]
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