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SenYong2yrCommentedThis more or less their apartment looks like. the top bedroom is valir bedroom, the middle is natalia bedroom, and the last is emilia and rafaela bedroom.
'Shit!Shit!Shit!Shit!Shit! I'M FUCKING DEAD' I panicked in my mind. I got to surprised by the system to the point I shouted my thought in the middle of the night. I forgot to mention that my room is located right beside Nat bedroom and the walls is quite thin here, so if we made a loud noise, the other can hear easily.- SenYong2yrCommented
Rafaela
The one on the left is a girl with a pair of black eyes, a long black hair tied on ponytail with a white ribbon. Unlike Natalia who like to wear revealing clothes, She wear a plain light blue shirt with white jacket on top of it, and a red training pants that covered her legs. She is my little sister maid, Rafaela. - SenYong2yrCommented
Emilia
The one on the right has a pair of beautiful purple eyes, long white hair that reached her waist. On her neck is a heart shaped pendant with a red gem inside it. She wears a simple and plain blue pajama. She is my little sister, Emilia. - SenYong2yrCommented
Natalia
As Valir was lost in in his thought, his room door suddenly opened and a girl show up. She has a somewhat sleepy brown eyes, long black hair reaching her tight. Her clothes are quite revealing, with the top being a white crop shirt that expose some of her cleavage and white navel, a black jacket on top of it, and a blue short jeans that shows her slim legs. - SenYong2yrReplied to Bryson99
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I'm not very used to read something that usually need a lot of thought and emotion but I can say that this book really can bring out emotions from the reader. I'm also very confused because there are many POV and fragent thoughts here and there, but I can say that the author is amazing since writing with different POV can really be confusing. Well keep the hard work author!