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Mugetsu353

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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3538mth
    Commented

    I think a training montage, would be nice.

    Ch 46 Yūgao Uzuki
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    The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Version_401
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3538mth
    Replied to WangLing3

    Thanks

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    As a Magnate, I Started Checking in at a Convenience Store
    Urban · I Want Mangoes, Not Mangoes
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu35310mth
    Replied to jasper_saber

    百年修仙,我快死了金手指才来, raw

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    Following a Hundred Years of Cultivation, I'm dying Before I Got Cheats
    Eastern · West Traveler
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu35310mth
    Commented

    Great chapter, I'm enjoying this story.

    Ch 21 Breeze Sword Technique
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    Following a Hundred Years of Cultivation, I'm dying Before I Got Cheats
    Eastern · West Traveler
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu35310mth
    Commented

    Great chapter, thanks. I liked the interactions between the trio.

    Ch 15 Fourth Level
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    Legacy of the Lost Sect
    Eastern · HandsomeWriter
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu35310mth
    Commented

    Great chapter. I enjoyed this one the most so far, especially with the slight info dumps you gave, makes a lot of things I was unsure about make sense. I noticed on third paragraph, second line you said "pantses" I think plural is still pants. Thanks for chapter, this one felt more exciting. But I might just like fighting.

    Ch 11 Guerilla Tactics
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    Legacy of the Lost Sect
    Eastern · HandsomeWriter
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu35310mth
    Commented

    Great chapter. I'm excited to see him fight, this will be the first proper fight we see. Cam Han Jin and Fatty Wan not cultivate at all, or do they just have bad cultivation talent? Thanks.

    Ch 8 The Weight Of A Knife
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    Legacy of the Lost Sect
    Eastern · HandsomeWriter
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu35310mth
    Posted

    Hey, Mr. HandsomeWriter I love the new story so far. Although I haven't read enough to make a good analysis of your story. I enjoy the way your story doesn't drag unnecessary scenes or explanations. It seems to be more to the point and I enjoy the premise of the mystical book, even though we don't know much about it yet. Keep writing! Looking forward to future chapters.

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    Legacy of the Lost Sect
    Eastern · HandsomeWriter
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Great chapters, very interesting. I binged all 28 chapters. I'm looking forward to more.

    Ch 28 No time to lose
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    TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World
    TV · SrCuervo
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    I understand that's an erotic scene ,but isn't that too much? Bleeding like that over naked women, that's anime over reaction .But he's only 8, even if he has mentality of older guy and even that perk ,he still shouldn't be that horny. But whatever do your thing I suggest tone down reactions like that

    Ch 8 Ch 8 Ino Yamanaka (18+)
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    At least stick to the names you made the characters. You said at least 3 different names for the same guy that is very confusing

    "Little trick!" Pei Zusui sideways dodged Qianben, and a group of crows suddenly appeared on Pei Zushen's back.
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    Konoha civilian ninja
    Anime & Comics · TheDarkKight0
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Try to write the jutdu names properly if you can, makes it confusing or just annoying if not.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 The Sealed Book
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    Konoha civilian ninja
    Anime & Comics · TheDarkKight0
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    At least try to use the proper character names it's very confusing without that

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Konoha
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    Konoha civilian ninja
    Anime & Comics · TheDarkKight0
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Thanks can't wait for more

    Ch 18 Greencloud City
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    Reborn In Cultivation World (Ancient Strengthening Technique)
    Book&Literature · tai_master9903
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    I had really high hopes for this story, but I'm sorry I'm not enjoying the story at all, the Mc is over dramatic for my tastes and gives a very annoying interaction between other characters. Good work writing stories is hard. Cheers I'm out.

    Ch 13 CH_13: Chakra
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
    Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Thanks can't wait for more.

    Ch 1 Chapter -14
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    떨어진 한숨
    Anime & Comics · Hiatusmund
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Really good chapter can't wait for more hope you update faster but thanks.

    Ch 9 The One
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    Naruto : The Fastest Ninja
    Anime & Comics · Kayden_Break_
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Maybe give him king of God's ancient gods eye.

    Ch 13 Calligraphy, Professions In Cultivation World
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    Reborn In Cultivation World (Ancient Strengthening Technique)
    Book&Literature · tai_master9903
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Thanks for chapter

    Ch 10 Killing spree! - part 2
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    The Only Player in Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Enri007
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  • Mugetsu353
    Mugetsu3531yr
    Commented

    Great chapter, can't wait for more! Is this a translation? Give original name if it is. Thanks.

    Ch 9 Peak of Houtian(4)
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    Reborn In Cultivation World (Ancient Strengthening Technique)
    Book&Literature · tai_master9903
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