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Great chapter. I enjoyed this one the most so far, especially with the slight info dumps you gave, makes a lot of things I was unsure about make sense. I noticed on third paragraph, second line you said "pantses" I think plural is still pants. Thanks for chapter, this one felt more exciting. But I might just like fighting.
Hey, Mr. HandsomeWriter I love the new story so far. Although I haven't read enough to make a good analysis of your story. I enjoy the way your story doesn't drag unnecessary scenes or explanations. It seems to be more to the point and I enjoy the premise of the mystical book, even though we don't know much about it yet. Keep writing! Looking forward to future chapters.
I understand that's an erotic scene ,but isn't that too much? Bleeding like that over naked women, that's anime over reaction .But he's only 8, even if he has mentality of older guy and even that perk ,he still shouldn't be that horny. But whatever do your thing I suggest tone down reactions like that
At least stick to the names you made the characters. You said at least 3 different names for the same guy that is very confusing