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this is Battle through the heavens Fanfic not soul lanf
He can notice tiny details around him, like the size and shape of things, and even feel life forces and electricity. What makes him special is that his senses mix together â sounds turn into colors, electrical hums have textures. It's like all senses working together to form an image of what he cannot see. This helps him understand the world in a really cool way, and his sixth sense.
Well, who knows? it's a fantasy world, maybe it took the cub more than one year to come into existence.
She Long is the one who stopped Mr. Sword Douluo, I'll edit it after getting some sleep.
I am giving this review based on my liking, and everyone has different preferences. Also, as an author, here are the things I would suggest:-Hermes woke up from his slumber. I think 'slumber' is not the correct word; describing how he opened his eyes would be smoother.-The advice I give to every author is that breaking the long paragraph into shorter ones can enhance readability, especially during transitions or changes in the character's thoughts.-The transition from the physical sensations to the character's memories of the previous night is a bit abrupt.-"Too bad I don't have any cell service right now. Or else, I would have been able to call 911, let alone expose some alien murals..." could be clearer if separated into two sentences for better readability.-Using "He was filled with fear, knowing that he might never see his family again," might sound much better than "may." -And avoid using 'Hermes couldn't help but' multiple times in a single Chapter, as it was used three times, and in the starting line at that.
her charm skill relies on her opponent's senses, not their sight. When she activates her charm skill, she creates an illusion that is powerful enough that it can even deceive blind characters.
It indicates change in pov, like shift in the camera from the hero to the villain
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