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Please fix this. This is super distracting and makes for what could have been an enjoyable read …
How is she able to look into her eyes?? Typo
*one of her breasts
*you’re
You should probably proofread this paragraph. Also, ”other mounds” … how many breasts does she have?
*continuous dedication
Again … how many tongues does he have?
*You’re