Daniel_Coupe

You honestly could do 2-3 a week and be fine. Your writing is wonderful and I like to wait a week or so to do a stockpile read. Your awesome Author

Welcome back. Excited for the continuation story had me worried you were dropping it.

Personally think a time skip would work. But you also need to create a skeleton of the story. You have the Big Bang, assassin creed and John wick story lines already introduced. Maybe a rewrite when you have a better structure. Love the way you write right now. You know how to write and write well.

I got bored after the first 100 chapters or so. It was a good introduction to the story but it just got bogged in details.

+1. It’s a very good fic

Very good story. Grammer is atrocious. You really need a editor. The character development is good. There is enough that you could expand on it. Was a good read but very hard to read as the nouns for people was all over the place.

Dude. I love the twist this book has. The writing quality is superb. Background info on characters is developing so well. Definitely a well done book so far. Super super excited to see where the rest of the story will take us. Really well done. Keep up the good work.

Was very interesting to read. Never knew of the lore for the Witcher so this was cool to read.

Story is super fantastic. From my perspective of not knowing anything about the fallout series except for what a pop boy did, this story gave a great introduction and background and has made me want to actually look into the games and play them. Very good writing. Loved the story. You did a very good on the romance part I thought for a apocolypse story and the ending was superb.

Can we keep him? Can we, can we, can we?