You know once in a while you find a really great story that reignites your interest to something you thought that you wont care about anymore.. yeah that's what I am feeling after reading this.. probably the best pokemon fanfic in this website.. by far, its like path to to power but for pokemon.

thank you and yes the captain thing was kinda iffy but hey we learn from our mistakes I will try my best not to repeat that mistake again have a nice day as well.

I don't think reviews work like that? i mean mind telling me why its trash... i am 100% sure its not as good as some of the other fanfics in this site but... it certainly isn't worst... i know somethings are forced but.. and i know the concept of reviews entirely subjective but... can you at least expand on your views why it is trash... I am a rookie "author" correction i don't consider myself a author more like a writer and constructive critique is really appreciated.

Yes I have read that novel and yes that book is good but I had this name even before I knew webnovel existed so... it's not its trademarked or anything.

Oh look.. anyother guy who thinks that growing organic food will be more delicious oh come on dude its just placebo effect.. organic fruit is no different from regular foods in fact must of the 'Organic' fruit you eat is just conventional fruit with a tag and a markup.. seriously.. I have tried both of them. Well.. sorry for the rant and I hate the fact that must people think that organic food are a lot better than regular food.. they might be a bit better but not enough to make up for the larger land usage and higher production cost.

Yes..but not that much just a little.

Sorry dude I cant fulfill that request... since that was already something I was going to do.

No, I dont plan to have him have less mana for the entire story in fact he will increase his mana amount pretty soon as for how it is a secret.

Oh.. you seem to think that this white Vipers squad is like danzo's root.. it kinda is but not really and about the wizard king's library a lot of books are going to be restricted and stuff.. and yes MC is the leader of the squad but Julius is the one who controls it and gives it tasks. Mc is responsible for managing the tasks given by the wizard king so, actually being the leader he doesn't have total control over the squad. All and all the 'White Vipers' isnt like Danzo's root more like hokage's anbu. It does the dark stuff but isnt as dark as the root. and being the leader he can manage and recruit people in that squad but Julius still has the authority to overwrite his commands.. so being the leader isnt that big of a deal. I agree with you It wont have make sense for him to make a kid who he just met the leader of the squad and all but this is Julius who we are talking about.. I know it might be a bit forced but I dont think it is that forced like you said but maybe.. making him the squad leader so soon was going an extra mile. Anyways, Thank you constructive criticism like yours is really appreciated. -Damien

No

Understood And thank u... I didn't know u could delete chapters

I agree I wont give him a sword but another weapon and it will be more of a spell then a weapon like hiw Yuno's bow works.

Yes there are some things like that.

both eyes are the same this time.

With bluer hair and eyes

Like this but a little different clothes.

like this.

Like this