DamienGrem

Would you mind me steali- I mean getting inspired by this idea my friend?

Arthur about to bring freedom into the world of magic.

It is a painful thing, to watch pieces of fiction that you care so deeply about being ripped apart for money. I understand that. This fanfic is pretty great, even with my previous comment, I think this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It must hurt tho. I am not at all emotionally invested in the franchise as you are but even so, I can understand what you are saying.

He is going to break them isn't he...

I mean, with Mist magic, Trap magic does fit Nebra alot better. Also, since Solid inherits the most from his father, you should make him have the same altitude for healing magic. It fits thematically. Otherwise he would just be an inferior Noelle. Make him the greatest healer or smth. I hope you don't neglect the two other siblings like in the OG manga. Also, creating artifacts and enchanting isn't touched alot in the original series so you could do something with that.

Nozel rn

You know once in a while you find a really great story that reignites your interest to something you thought that you wont care about anymore.. yeah that's what I am feeling after reading this.. probably the best pokemon fanfic in this website.. by far, its like path to to power but for pokemon.

thank you and yes the captain thing was kinda iffy but hey we learn from our mistakes I will try my best not to repeat that mistake again have a nice day as well.

I don't think reviews work like that? i mean mind telling me why its trash... i am 100% sure its not as good as some of the other fanfics in this site but... it certainly isn't worst... i know somethings are forced but.. and i know the concept of reviews entirely subjective but... can you at least expand on your views why it is trash... I am a rookie "author" correction i don't consider myself a author more like a writer and constructive critique is really appreciated.

Yes I have read that novel and yes that book is good but I had this name even before I knew webnovel existed so... it's not its trademarked or anything.