Imperator_Nicolae
I know how this story ends, so NO.
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The ones that complain don't know the half of it. You as an author are very good at providing relief in this story. You provide hope while grabbing the hearth or the reader. Take their complaints as compliments for how well you write, as keeping their attention and hopes for the characters is a hard thing to do. An invested reader is one the will complain when things don't go well for the character they like. Much better than a story that spends +70 chapters beating up the characters, with no hint of a relife or hope for the characters. The fact that you take your time in pointing out things that will help, that readers may not notice, the characters later.
The story is very good. I just can't take how much sorrow is in it, without the proper relief. it's making me depressed just reading, chapter after chapter of depression. Sorry about that. Story development is kind of chaotic. The power of the bad guy jumps power levels like there on sale, buy one gets three free. the steps of the evil character don't add up with the personalty he shows, As if he is controlled. Reference of a powerful mage that leaves others for death. I'm expecting the need of a diox ex machina.