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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te27d
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    I hope for the next chapters to come out.

    Ch 1 Prologue - 1
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    Pokemon: Echoes of the Abyss
    Anime & Comics · Zephyr107
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te1mth
    Commented

    I think the author is overusing Teleport a bit. It's still a low-priority move, especially if you move a few more objects and use it so often.

    Ch 43 Chapter 42 : The Grand Heist - Second Attempt!
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te3mth
    Replied to Zephyr107

    Great, looking forward to it

    Ch -2 Move Proficiency
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    Pokemon: Echoes of the Abyss
    Anime & Comics · Zephyr107
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te3mth
    Commented

    It's good. 👍👍 But I'd like to know how status moves would work though, because the buffs from the games are too high for real combat. And the same effect of debuffs for everyone regardless of level sounds unfair.

    Ch -2 Move Proficiency
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    Pokemon: Echoes of the Abyss
    Anime & Comics · Zephyr107
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te3mth
    Commented

    The content of the plans is very similar to "Pokemon - The Timeless Journey". Some of the phrases are the same.

    Ch -3 My plan :-
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    Pokemon: Echoes of the Abyss
    Anime & Comics · Zephyr107
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te3mth
    Posted

    It can't be that bad, I hope it's just a humorous parody.... The MC is cardboard, there is no story, all the action is stupid and illogical, the battles are terrible.

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    The Monster: Trainer Kota
    Fantasy · VILLIAN_MAKER
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te8mth
    Posted

    I am writing after reading the original. An excellent work showing the formation of a man from the bottom. The author demonstrates an excellent knowledge of Pokemon, which includes competitive tactics, species features, the plot of games, anime, and even special chapters. He also saturates the world with his great ideas such as the legion, new characters and an interesting plot. Of the minuses, there is too much attention to legends and some one-sided battles at the very beginning and especially at the end of the work, where they forget about tactics and there is an exchange of powerful techniques. But in the middle the fights are great.

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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te8mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the update!!!

    Ch 51 Crunchy sponge
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    Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto
    Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te8mth
    Commented

    Thanks for update

    Ch 638 Chapter 638 A girl who grew up with the dragon
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te9mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the update

    Ch 636 Chapter 636 Something Hidden
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te9mth
    Posted

    After volume 1. A typical FF, where anime is based and is a harem, with low-quality battles and stupidly strong main hero. Disadvantages: 1) Too strong a protogonist who never loses, nor does victory require absolutely no effort from him ( All his talent is reduced to knowledge from a past life and reinforcement from God? ). 2) Disgusting one-sided description of most battles where the main character dominates whoever he can, as 3-4 moves of his Pokémon make enemies do nothing + ignoring the system of types and effects from moves. 3) Introduction of some fantasies of the author, available only to the protogonist (coverings, domains and others). 4) Weak dialogues and grammar, poor English. 5) Uninteresting minor characters (due to the overloaded protogonist) Advantages: 1) Generally good main story and rare monologues at the beginning of chapters 2) Gradually improving the quality of writing and even a couple of good battles 3) Initially attempt to make a non-standard team

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    Pokemon : Aura of Darkness
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te9mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 634 Chapter 634 Audino's Nickname and Positioning
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te10mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the update

    Ch 633 Chapter 633 Kommo-o!
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te10mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 632 Chapter 632 Mega Alakazam Appears!
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te10mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 630 Chapter 630 Forest Doctor
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te10mth
    Commented

    Daniel's Beedrill:

    Ch 370 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 370
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    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • Black_Wh1te
    Black_Wh1te10mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 627 Chapter 627 Close Combat of the Third Layer!
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    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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