OrangeCube380

I've enjoyed reading this book currently, and wishes that the author will keep on being consistent to publish new chapters and continue to the end. Here are the pros of the story: - Really well done progression, we get to see the characters move around in the world. - Foreshadowing, makes the story seem eerie and gives a sort of horror vibe to it without being too scary. - Likeable characters, I really relate with the characters and hope that the author will continue to grow their personalities. One thing to improve on would be the world background, of course this is hard to get right but more details would be better imo.

Nice first chapter! Looking forward to the next few :)