ChosenSage

It’s a bit of a spoiler, all I can say is kind of

Eh, yes and no, it’s less about her and more about his pride and the fact that she hadn’t died in one strike, which he favors doing, it’s a pride thing who cares ab that girl lol

Thank you very much for the five stars, glad you’re enjoying it so far

Why?

Hey just read it, got some suggestions if you wanna read em. I suggest taking those first two chapters off and adding that authors note to the start or end of your first chapter. Now for the writing, it kind of falls flat, like the whole killing father thing should probably be described. Don’t tell show basically. It’s not bad but just take your time, you could have a chapter of introductory stuff so people can get a feel for your main character and his personality and such, rather than him just saying how he is

Yeah I already decided I didn’t want Esdeath as love interest if he has one. It’s just so overplayed and I don’t think Hado’s and her personalities can connect without forcing it

Def not, not a fan of that kinda thing, the prostitution ring is mainly a source of income and easiest way to display his control over people, he likes being in control, but nah to what you said

Have plans for her later, trust the vision

Well yeah, never said it would be successful, we early stages right now lol I’m just giving insight to Hado’s mindset

It’s true🤷🏽‍♂️