4/10

can i know where is i can continue to reas this novel?

the story is good, but if the system penalty is not too much, it will be more comfortable

does MC forget his memory or is it repetition to change? Is his 15 years of memory nothing that he remembers

if the MC character doesn't change 180 degrees. fix this story just a waste of time. too many similar MCs plus the story is always playing. just like adding a lot of words

in the end MC remains a naive person. I guess MC will be the antihero from the title

too many unnecessary plots like just to prolong the story. it would be better if the planet was turned into an island because sometimes it's like there is no atri plane

getting out of your comfort zone is the best. no words for the idea. thanks for the story

something different for a chinese storyline,but it's better than not daring to step out of your comfort zone.you are the best.thank you for the story.i'm getting bored with stories with cliché plots

if MC doesn't take revenge after this insult. 1 star fix

interesting story. but hopefully not a story with the same storyline from the others. I'm getting tired of the many stories with the same path, tired of the MC being too innocent

is the MC female?

it would be more beautiful if innocent could get it all. but all is not as beautiful as the shadow,

it would be better if the main character has a tough character. It's just that the main character feels forced to talk like that. if the main character is more assertive it will make the story better

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