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~This... is not how I imagined being sandwiched between two beautiful mature women would feel like..~ He slowly started to eat while not making any sounds of displeasure from the sheer spiciness of his food.- Shou_Ryuu_62826mthCommented"See, this is why I don't scream during sex.. You're not decisive enough! You have the body, the intimidation.. use it, Ghira!" She heard Kali complain, which made her choke on her saliva.
- Shou_Ryuu_62826mthCommented"Thanks Horny Mom!" Yang said with a smile and touched Raven's horn.
- Shou_Ryuu_62826mthCommented~DRAG HER BACK! RAPE HER! CLAIM HER!!~
- Shou_Ryuu_62826mthCommented
He is trying best!!!!
"But Dad! Olaf thinks tha stoopid. Even Poy knows tha. Proably...", Olaf said with incertitude, Poyo two kilometers away, glared at Olaf with his beady eyes looking in two different directions, he was scaring no one. - Shou_Ryuu_62826mthReplied to Muiyuki_SnowfallSomething you'd imagine an alien god to have or a real biblical angel… and I loved it.
- Shou_Ryuu_62826mthReplied to Alpha_Idiot
sauce?
It was the fault of a certain titan that was oblivious to all the problems he caused to humans by dabbling with his power and by merely living here. - Shou_Ryuu_62826mthReplied to E_os(A/N: You'll find out.)
- Shou_Ryuu_62826mthCommentedCh 42 Not a chapter
- Shou_Ryuu_62827mthPosted
Okay first of all I really love this story, it's a 10 our of 10 for me. Yes something's might need a bit more work, but it's only small and very little stuff. I really love how you let her character flesh out and be pretty realistic, how she still feels human instead of how other stories might make her more of a 1 in a million type of person. I'm not completely sure why Shane is just rolling with her but from what I read so far I'm guessing it's because she kinda butterflied a lot of the events that led to his breakdown. I love the story so far.
- Shou_Ryuu_628210mthCommented
I dunno I feel like you are writing this extremely well, everything is fitting in well for me and it makes so much more sense and I don't have to turn my brain off just to enjoy it so that's good too. You are doing an amazing job and I absolutely love how your character's actually feel real to me instead of just a 2d character, it helps me feel for them and enjoy the story a lot more.
Ch 10 Not a chapter (Stupid comments will be directed here because I am sick of answering them) - Shou_Ryuu_628211mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Shou_Ryuu_62821yrReplied to The_man_The_myth"Damn, you'd think the afterlife would have better customer service." said the boy as he stood up and took a look around. It seems he was in an office space complete with walls.
- Shou_Ryuu_62821yrReplied to Shirabe
sauce
"I didn't mention it had to be on the lips, y'know? ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°" - Shou_Ryuu_62821yrCommented"Welcome to hell."
- Shou_Ryuu_62821yrCommented
I'll be honest I love your story, though some parts are a bit difficult for me to understand but I appreciate your hard work
Also, I noticed some people who were like, WTF when she told them her life story, and I'm like 1, she has spent 30 years with the same four entities you think she is gonna be able to interact with people normally? she's part Succubus and Dragon, she may have picked up some personality traits of the others anyway, Like "For the Greater Good" Archer would be pissed about it, While she would at most be mad but still have the same happy face while doing something like Archer's whole ideals talk. 2, she's not well versed in wizard etiquette and is socially awkward. 3, I believe that all Magical people would treat their kids as a gift especially after WW1 (Wizarding War 1), and to hear that a Magical child was treated like a House Elf would mortify them. 4, I am not perfect I try my best but I'm gonna make mistakes and I hope you can point them out and help me fix them. 5, I am not going to do another one of these explaining things in a chapter because it feels like I'm trying to beef up the word count if you want explanations or to ask me something join the discord server https://discord.gg/9274TfZtf9. # - Shou_Ryuu_62821yrReplied to Shota_Prince
Them:
'Fuck.' - Shou_Ryuu_62821yrReplied to Error_696
I think it's around the end of like Avengers, winter soldier. I think
"Mothertrucke-" - Shou_Ryuu_62821yrReplied to THENAMELESSONE
I'll take the last option anytime
"I AM NOT BECOMING A TRAP VTUBER! GO FU-!]