Bigou

A nice start. Will you ever write more of this story?

"My soul is weakenED", (and not weekend) you had written the word well in the previous paragraph. 😉

I think you wanted to say no CHOICE here, that would make far more sense.

I think "no choice" make far more sense than what is written.

I honestly loved this story, thanks for sharing it. It's well written and all. There is only one phrase which seems to have ONE lone word missing toward the end of the last chapter. (But that's easy to correct.) As for the "stability of update", can't judge since I only discovered this story once it had ended. So to be fair, and since you can't skip a note, I put the maximum. (Not that stability of update is anything important to me, as long as there is update until the story ended.)

"Almost everything a human seemed sexual in some way." Me think there is a word missing here.

Er… What's the language of this story? Why is it's tittle in English when the rest clearly isn't?

I think you wanted to write body here instead of bpdy, but I might be wrong ;)

I believed doorway to have long become a lone word in English? (Unless you want to speak of something that's in the way/path of the door, potentially blocking it.) Granted, that's a rather minor error anyway…

Another error in the same paragraph that I hadn't seen before "they are like famuly to me" instead of family. (But don't let those two little things discourage you to continue.)