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This story is going great and I find it fun and intresting to read, personally I feel the story is a bit rushed, if you csn please kind of elaborate things and take it a bit slow, so that we can really immerse into the story rather then just feel like reading a rushed story, apart from the pace everything is really awesome keep going, hope you continue uploading.
yes he just has a chinese ancestry, he is born and bought up in spain, so he will be spanish, but we know chinese novels they potray themselves like gods. So it is kinda inevitable.
now even afterlife sounds depressing 😭😭🤣
exactly 🤣, more like a forced sucide for all regardless of their willingness.
in a way it's kinda true, like man got sent to past from the future without any use of technology, so the most pausible answer is god sent him back to past.
well if somone lives in a multiverse where there is a constant threat of super villans,aliens and gods trying to enslave or destroy the world, then many would rather prefer to erase everything and not exisit rather than suffer everyday.
man this writing and story is just awesome, but the AI bits are really starting to get on my nerves, every other paragraph there is talk about balence of cosmos shifting this and that, and how the fabric of destines are effected and that, it is just frustating and taking away the true feel of reading. Hope you keep this AI usage to the lowest as this story has a lot of potential and is amazing.
I would have asked for doomsday level of adaptation.
In my personal opinion both are great ideas, for the first one he can rely on the existing harry potter work for much of characters, he will also have an already established plot, to which he can make changes and hence changing the plot, he will have a storyline to rely on, but for the second idea he has to be lot of innovative and should create lot of plot on his own to make it intresting. Both have pros and cons in the first one people mostly expect their fav characters to be same or have a better life hence may fell dissapointed if their aspects and behaviour are changed, but for the swcond idea he can explore and innovate his own ideas and can go all out as there would be no pre established expectations on the characters, knowing these he can make his choice, but before doing so stick to the story to which you can envision a proper ending.
Well I am satisfied with how bishma made choice to take the loss, it stays true to his character potrayed in the original mahabarath overall I am loving the way this novel is shaping, hope ypu also recruit ekalavya and find a way to restore his thumb. Also waiting for more updates.