Dragon_dick_6222
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Man it was edgy as FK. Make him a little laid back and chill. He can't always be this serious and take every word to heart. Moreover, the story is lacking the actual fluff. The plot are barley moving. The MC is fking one girl at morning another girl at noon and another at night maybe two. I hope you can think of something more interesting to drive the plot and add a little fluffiness.
Yeah, man I can't understand what's with these sis-con people. Always simping over Lil sister. Jane was dumb as FK. Sigh* the 1 chapter's gonna turn off many people. Could have been better. At least, the sister could have been held as hostage and the MC died rescuing her would have be so much better.
Though, I doubt G.Red actually died. Since, he's the representation of dreams. Moreover, In the real Bible's last revelation, there is a dragon mentioned. It was said that when the God first created light the universe dreamt of being born. G.Red is the embodiment of the universe's dream. Since, the beginning of creation.
Man, will he save his parents or let them die? I don't know about the father but I wish you can keep his mom. Moreover, please stop describing how cute he is and how overwhelmingly handsome he'd be in the future. It's getting very repetitive. All in all, it's good just take a moment to explaining everything all over again in every chapter. He's cute, he'll be handsome we get it. The first time we start to read. Thanks and keep up the GOOD WORK! Your FF is unique. Peace!
Hi! I'm the author so obviously I'll give myself a pat on the shoulders and give a 5 star review. Whatever, This is my first story, I did my best to commit many mistakes. The sorry will have a harme, the MC is smart and will use his brains along with his dick. I'll try to post as much as possible but do keep in mind. I'm not a full-time writer also you read fantasy to escape reality, so why try so hard to make sense out of everything? This is fantasy bro just chill and enjoy.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]