Dragon_dick_6222

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Only been 6 months and already thinking about death. Pretty dark outlook the MC has, I must say.

I hope Ashi make friends with the anime world's Jhonny sins, aka, the caped baldy.

Man it was edgy as FK. Make him a little laid back and chill. He can't always be this serious and take every word to heart. Moreover, the story is lacking the actual fluff. The plot are barley moving. The MC is fking one girl at morning another girl at noon and another at night maybe two. I hope you can think of something more interesting to drive the plot and add a little fluffiness.

Man I want to see his status! Let me know how bigger MC's chakra got.

Yeah, man I can't understand what's with these sis-con people. Always simping over Lil sister. Jane was dumb as FK. Sigh* the 1 chapter's gonna turn off many people. Could have been better. At least, the sister could have been held as hostage and the MC died rescuing her would have be so much better.

Though, I doubt G.Red actually died. Since, he's the representation of dreams. Moreover, In the real Bible's last revelation, there is a dragon mentioned. It was said that when the God first created light the universe dreamt of being born. G.Red is the embodiment of the universe's dream. Since, the beginning of creation.

First, and please keep up the good work. It's been amazing throughout. Please please PLEASE don't leave it half way through. I request.

Yeah, reigning as the apex existence had made G.Red too careless. Causing her downfall at the hands of ExE Gods.

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