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  • dp_19
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    one of the best one piece fanfics. character development: 5/5 story engagement: 5/5 what else do we need ?

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    One Piece: Path to Power
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  • dp_19
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    ?

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    Marvel: The Death Surgeon
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  • dp_19
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    "You don't know me, son!" Luffy yelled through gritted teeth, as he pushed the barbell from his chest, "You don't know me, son!" he repeated as he pushed through. 
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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
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  • dp_19
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    🤣

    God knows where he would end up if he had control of the Merry. Nami already had the charts to the place they needed to go, and they were already on their way there, flying silently and invisibly.
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    Journey to the One Piece
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  • dp_19
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    somehow he will end up in a different Anime.

    God knows where he would end up if he had control of the Merry. Nami already had the charts to the place they needed to go, and they were already on their way there, flying silently and invisibly.
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    Journey to the One Piece
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  • dp_19
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    Peter smirked tauntingly. "Magic."
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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  • dp_19
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    ?

    "So I am here to finally end this fight. Any last words" Danzo asked.
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • dp_19
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    finally!!! some typical mob dialogue

    "Ungrateful Bitch! I gave you face only for you to refuse a toast and be forced to drink a forfeit!" Li Changfeng's scarred face turned red with unimaginable anger as he bellowed out in infuriation.
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    God Eye Variant | King of Gods fanfic
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  • dp_19
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    *disappeared

    Just under 1 minute the biggest building in the entire Konohagakure No Sato, disappear.
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • dp_19
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    'If I tell you I can control the shape and intensity of a fart, then would you believe me?'
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    God Eye Variant | King of Gods fanfic
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  • dp_19
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    rasengan ?I don't think hiruzen performed it in his lifetime both dead or reanimated.

    "Strawww hatttt!!" Moria roared Luffy looked at him, lifted his palm, and did another technique that Ken had to double take. It was Rasengan.
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    Journey to the One Piece
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  • dp_19
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    *around him

    This was the first self-made move others had seen Luffy make. His body transformed, crackling with lightning, and especially his hands were covered with red lightning. The lightning also seemed hotter than the normal ones people come across. As Moria was sucking the shadows of the people around her, including the people who were hidden, Luffy hit directly where it would hurt Moria.
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    Journey to the One Piece
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  • dp_19
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    did you ask the original author's permission to post it here ?if not at least give credit for that.original fic from fanfiction:https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11267384/1/Chiaroscuro

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  • dp_19
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    Qiu Mengyu was indeed a 'spear raiser' without a doubt.
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    God Eye Variant | King of Gods fanfic
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  • dp_19
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    Commented

    energy fruit is consumed by this un-named weapon if I remember correctly.

    1. *Luffy (Jushi Jushi no mi) (Energy Energy fruit) [All] (All 3 Haki)
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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
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    "You really don't recognize Mount Tai? I don't know what to say anymore." Zhao Wei shook his head with a fake mix of pity and reverence written on his face.
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  • dp_19
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    The only good thing about this novel is the author's writing quality.story development is almost non-existing with the unique ability of the mc this story could be one of the best Naruto fanfic but , the author thought why bother.

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    The Ability Theft In Naruto
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  • dp_19
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    Commented

    kamar taj

    His followers nodded, their eyes burning with power hungry desire. The Zealots scattered, each one preparing for the battle that would bring them closer to their ultimate goal… the annihilation of the Kamar-Tak and the ascent of Dormammu's reign.
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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  • dp_19
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    The story started well but slowly it went to sh*t. I'm assuming that the author doesn't have any foolproof plans for the story. He is just going along with wherever he has in mind at the moment.Chapters were short and that too most of the content is MC's thoughts.

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    In Naruto With Minato Template
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  • dp_19
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    you should change the single quotes for thoughts and double for speech.that's the common practice you see here.

    ' is for speech
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    One piece (Raging flames)
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