SoulStar_2686

Author forgot about soul echo hearing he has from that bat😐

Why does he need blood spirits when he can already control others by using his daughter gems and they are much more powerful than the original Doesn't make any sense, 1st he said he didn't want anything like his mind control daughter gem powers now he's trying to gain a similar yet worse ability 🤨😐

Which part of "able to absorb energy" don't you get brother? He's not a rubber man He's Kevin from ben 10 now except it seems like he can't polymorph into other creatures like Kevin

And that ultra boot was just some normal boot design not some futuristic boot

His world hadn't even achieved a hoverbike, how are you calling it futuristic? His world's achievements are parallel to ours from the sound of it

Make money and remain at the bottom of the world for life? He already told before, he can only make limited types of cards, he's able to make equipment cards cause of his previous life knowledge and some other cards cause of this body's knowledge from his parents

You are looking at it from the reader's prospective If we look at it from the person in the story then she's really betting hard on a 17yr old kid in doing something that even many grown men of higher level may fail at

Why isn't new chapter comming????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Did something happen to author???????????????????

Well apart from calculation here nd there I don't see any cons of this story