Yeah there is no romance and it’s male lead

Are you asking if the main character will have a Harem?

The author did well at setting the scene and describing what goes on. I also like the relationship between Theaus and Shura. You did a good job of characterizing their bond. But there are improvements to be made in terms of dialogue exchanges.

The character of drey is very interesting to me. His thoughts and actions show that there is a lot more to him and I will continue to read this novel. The way the author describes the world is superb and very immersive.

I like how you made use of sound effects it make m feel more Immersed in th action going on in the storye

Please make sure to leave a comment and review on my novel, and if you can leave a vote. I would greatly appreciate it.

Thanks I’ve been putting a lot of work into it.

Yeah we gotta get in a call one day.

Yo Ekiram, did you make this new cover art yourself?

Thank you

I love the premise of this story. They way you blended together certain topic is very unique and interesting. You put a twist on things I haven’t seen before.

I like the story, and I feel like you tied the events together pretty well. The main character's growth and development is great and the world is interesting. One area I feel you can improve upon though is the pacing in some parts of the story.

Yeah i should've proofread a little more. I think that may have thrown the perspective off a little as well, but i fixed the grammatical errors.

I can honestly say i enjoyed this novel. I've read 30 chapter and everyone was well worth it. The characters are well written and the stories premise is exciting and I cant wait to read more

Okay got it.

It's not letting me leave a review for some reason