Thanks for the chapter.

this is the first time I'm reading a naruto fan-fic that I really like. i think you're really good at this and i wish you don't stop writing this novel. i'd like to offer constructive criticism, but to me there's no bad points, and if there are, they're small enough to be forgotten. In my humble opinion, I would add that offering a deeper perspective on the events and writing from different people's perspectives can improve the quality of the novel.

interesting, standard first chapter. i think the only thing i see as a problem could be the spelling. i had a hard time understanding some sentences. english is not my mother tongue, so this could be my weakness.

DCU POV:

I don't know much about warhammer40k. Can someone inform me how powerful MC is?

I have read the 25 chapters published as of 18.04.2024. I quite liked the story and I liked the way the events were handled. I found the original novel on the internet but I can't read it because I don't speak Russian. I hope the translator will continue this work and finish translating the novel.

I don't like it, but I'll have to see how the author handles it.

SUS

I loved this novel. it is sad for me that you will be taking a break for a while. i wish you success with your new novel. i wish you success with what you mentioned as your new priority. thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

The clone thing is very annoying. I feel like the author is avoiding the difficulty. I hope the clone thing will be solved in the following chapters because I find it disturbing.

In my humble opinion, I would add that offering a deeper perspective on the events and writing from different people's perspectives can improve the quality of the novel.