this is the first time I'm reading a naruto fan-fic that I really like. i think you're really good at this and i wish you don't stop writing this novel. i'd like to offer constructive criticism, but to me there's no bad points, and if there are, they're small enough to be forgotten. In my humble opinion, I would add that offering a deeper perspective on the events and writing from different people's perspectives can improve the quality of the novel.
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