PhantomxKing

I would like it if the focus more on Astra with occasional pov switches for important events such as Rhefia and the 2nd oldest (cant remember how to spell her name) going to clear out the bandits.

I think they only become relics after the warrior dies and are blessed by the goddess to reward their valor hence they only work with the warriors descendants

I enjoyed the novel for the most part up to around 100ch mark and then it starts to fall off in my opinion ive dropped it at the 243ch my reasoning is the story development felt rushed it went from being relatively fluid with the MC having a nice power creep didnt get to over powered he fit in the world and then it just get a bit ridiculous defeating villain and claiming the world gets completely trivialized was disappointing and the whole shadow realm arc fells like it going to be the same, trivialized. Writing quality is the strongest aspect of the book it has a nice flow it never bogs down like some novels tend to do.

The writing is good it just really irritates me when authors make a world with "laws" and then just kick the sand castle over with a broken system that breaks the defined laws i dont mind a strong MC just have them build the strength with in the laws you took the time write, if that makes sense. Best of luck with your writing

Just the typical power fantasy nothing earned just bang low tier cultivation becomes stronger then just about every one else with no effort

personally, I think fluff is a bit necessary to build/grow charters, and when the "fluff" is skipped, it makes the overall story weaker. I think you have relatively good balance.

another novel that has the system hand everything to the Mc on a golden plater.

Glad i decided to come back to web novel to finish it was a fun journey that you took us on. Thank you for your dedication

it's mama's skill so it's using her mana I believe