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6. Harem/ Non-harem. Let your degeneracy show ig? This is wish-fulfillment after all. To be perfectly frank, I am not that great when it comes to lemons, so a pokemon harem is probably a big no-no (depends on how long this fic gets). But I am not that great when it comes to romance as well. so the people who like just one girl for a deep romantic relationship, I will not be able to do that as well, I am sorry. (Actually, I will not focus on the girls all that much I think, depends on the feedback, so harem/non-harem, shouldn't be a big deal breaker, because I wouldn't focus much on either aspects.)- DevilKing19941yrCommented
Or you could just turn his mind into a computer which would be impossible for someone from GOT to use you really didn't need to add all this trash
My first 4 months went into just vacuuming and sorting all my memories, at the end of which I got the legendary eidetic memory! Then the next month went into creating the best goddamn occlumency shields in existence. First there is the Wall throughout the perimeter of the consciousness, then ahead are thousands of miles of deep ocean, lava pools and tall mountains with krakens and dragons and eagles, each biome to destroy a different kind of legilimen. Then further inside is an inky black void that transports you in front of a freaking Death Star, choke filled with laser weapons and millennium falcons ready for deployment. The staff is still Storm Troopers, if you consider a person with Captain America level physique, with Quicksilver's speed and Hawkeye's accuracy, a normal Storm Trooper. Inside all of which is a computer that literally no one in all of Planetos knows how to operate, yes it is a bit of an overkill. - DevilKing19941yrReplied to PettyOfficer
Terrible idea mate she saw the House-Elf letting her go is a extremely bad idea
"Ok, well we have to save the girl anyway, so bring her here. Strip the bad guy of all is loot and banish the body. Clean the room so that there is no trace of blood or a fight." Ordered Chad firmly. - DevilKing19941yrReplied to Firepri
What?..... Umm Handguns existed way before Harry was even born
- 3 handguns. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Even if you kill all the Drug Dealers in the UK just move onto another country and then another and then another whilst you wait for the first country to replenish it's stock of drug dealers (more will always show up to fill the vacuum)
"The Master has given the operation the green light! Make sure you bring honour to our Master! Remember, only kill if it can not be helped. If all the drug dealers are dead, there will be no more people to target, then you will have no more missions!" - DevilKing19941yrCommented
I don't get the annoyance with Sirius Hagrid is suppose to be someone he can trust since he trusts Dumbledore why would he not let Hagrid have Harry Also fighting Hagrid over Harry could lead to Harry being hurt because of it so it's better to just let Hagrid take Harry for now and then pick him up later from Dumbledore is most likely what's going on in Sirius mind
'Bloody hell' Chad thought, 'how did that just happen? That worthless dog just abandoned me to catch Peter, I mean, I get it, but holy hell that's some cold-blooded nonsense right there! Suddenly I don't care you are going to spend ten years in Azkaban!' Chad wanted to curse up a storm, but with Hagrid there all he could do was internally rant at wizard stupidity. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Wait if Peter left his Foot behind then I very much doubt he will be able to best Sirius Black when they meet in the next few days
"I did it, Master, I hit him right in his eye! Stupid fat wizard forgot his foot when he popped away!" Boppy announced happily, his attitude radically different from how he was a couple of minutes ago. Before he was a sullen free elf, now he was a proud bonded and happy elf. Got to give it to the wizards of old, they knew how to enslave a race properly. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Whilst I think Dumbledore wasn't a Dark Lord I do think the man was not the good guy and could even be seen as the bad guy He put Harry into a abusive home and utterly ruined his potential I feel like it would have been a good idea for the Rob to give him a least Eidetic Memory since remembering everything from the books is going to be difficult
Ch 1 Chapter 1 - DevilKing19941yrCommented
I feel like ROB would owe it to him to at the very least give him Eidetic Memory because it's unlikely he'll be able to remember most of the books details ffs
"Are you kidding me? If you need help to become overpowered in the Potterverse, then you deserve to be tortured by the Dursleys. It is a world filled to the brim with wizards with no common sense. The smartest magical is Hermione, a little girl that could only be considered average in any other environment. Eleven-year-olds can bend reality to their will on their first day of school, and you need wishes to help you?" Rob asked with so much scorn that Chad was a little embarrassed. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Really? remove this it's so idiotic Don't tell, show
S:*uses Legillimens* - DevilKing19941yrCommented
For what? A riddle a primary school child could work out while half asleep and on drugs ffs
Pen:Good job Harry. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
That's the riddle? Kinda weak isn't it
Owl: What makes you go up and down? - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Really?
Daphne:Ugh whatever, my name's Daphne Greengrass. Happy now. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
All of this needs a rewrite it's headache inducing
S: Sssssurrrrrreeeeee Haaaaaarrrryyyyyy. - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Press X to Doubt again lol
5: The Weasleys - DevilKing19941yrCommented
Press X to Doubt
4: Severus Snape - DevilKing19941yrCommented
This story keeps getting worse and worse I really want to like this story but it needs a Rewrite ASAP before it's any good
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